Sorry if I misread early on. Is it smart to define yourself by how you talk? Why is academic writing so needlessly complex? When students learn about a complex subject at university, it can be difficult for them to explain what they have understood if they struggle with academic writing. And I teach a deviation in genealogies from German idealism and Nietzsche. I can only imagine how bad it gets at the academic level It's just a style of writing and it's not a reflection of intelligence just trivial knowledge THEfightsAREfixed, Nov 11, 2018 Can't say I enjoyed it but I found it interesting. I have read some Cavell, and I've read his stuff on film. It's not even for any purpose other than to impress other intellectually snooty von snootersons, It doesn't help anyone to write like that. I was an incredibly annoying kid when I learned a new word. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register. Is it smart to use certain words that only intellectuals will understand? And the disciplinary corner of film studies that I work in is called "film-philosophy," which just means using philosophy to analyze movies or using movies to analyze philosophy. We do as much platonic, Aristotle, Augustine, and Thomas as we do Heidegger, Wittgenstein, etc. I'm not done yet. I probably don't care about OLP because I'm not super interested in philosophy of language. That's their fault (but it's too bad philosophy is so damn exclusive ). Suppose you're a literary scholar at some elite university. Three Astronauts Endorse AZ’s GOP Senator Over Her Astronaut Senate Challenger, Fans Not Woke Enough to Watch the NBA Finals, CCPA - Do Not Sell My Personal Information. ). econometrics, accounting, law, etc). As an undergraduate, we were instructed to write as if you were reaching an audience that had no idea what you were talking about. Victoria Alexander I want to be like that too. The idea that writing should be clear, concise, and low-jargon isn’t a new one—and it isn’t limited to government agencies, of course. I see the internal reasoning here or there as to why folks would follow them (and maybe even make them more radical than they already are). Or an anthropologist...whatever. My wife also has a PhD though and, I guess I have a hard time calling Derrida or Foucault ridiculous because I see credibility in some of their claims. My theological stuff is rooted in Aquinas, Plotinus, Przywara, Balthasar, and a few contemporary people. The day I learned "ludicrous" I must have used it fifty times. As teachers it is a lot like throwing mud at a wall and seeing what sticks. Some folks are very specific in their language to convey very specific ideas. You might hate Foucalt or Derrida but you might love someone else and follow the line of thought down that path to create and express your own particular view and expression of the world. The balance is hard to find, but. This week i decided to catch up on and also read in advance for one of my courses and it occurred to me that a lot of academic writing is just so needlessly complex in how it's written. That might have been me posting reviews. I also teach my intro to philosophy course by making people read 50/50 ancient and modern. But to your point, as an academic I know exactly what you're referring to with the needless flowery language. I've about zero interest in Cavell and late or early Wittgenstein, I will defend the notion of reading a camp more than another though: your coursework takes you into prelims, and your prelims set you up with a copiousness to tackle teaching. There's a field called theory in the humanities. I did my PhD on the ideas of the philosopher Emmanuel Levinas. The traffic in academia - certainly in the humanities - only goes one way and we're supposed to pretend that the streets aren't congested and full of idiot drivers. I did my PhD in a department of media and cultural studies. They're still relying on secondary lit. So immediately there's a rejection of objective reason and empirical evidence in favor of subjective rationalization and, ultimately, total rejection of objective knowledge/truth. Sherdog.com is a property of Mandatory Media, LLC, monitoring_string = "5200e30beed193e5fe31f8bccc2bdcbf". Essays give students the chance to explain what … ... your coursework takes you into prelims, and your prelims set you up with a copiousness to tackle teaching. I could not be stopped. Discussion in 'Mayberry Lounge' started by EL CORINTHIAN, Nov 9, 2018. Copyright HotAir.com/Salem Media. By its very nature, postmodernism can be subjectively interpreted to be anything the writer/reader decides it to be. Academic writing is like an assignment and each task comes with its own instructions. But you don't get any big prizes for it. They're worthy of engagement. That's fine when applied to the inherently subjective arenas of art, culture, philosophy, etc but it's not an appropriate mode of analysis for science or mathematics or logic (or any of their derivative disciplines i.e. “Persistence is one of the great characteristics of a pitbull, and I guess owners take after their dogs,” says Annetta Cheek, the co-founder of the D.C.-based nonprofit Center for Plain Language. I'm teaching, but I've still got some bits of a dissertation to write. They talk incomprehensibly, we talk incomprehensibly. My philosophy guys are Heidegger, Husserl, Gadamar, and Marion, which means I'm fairly well read with German idealism as a whole, especially Kant and Schelling. https://www.theatlantic.com/education/archive/2015/10/complex-academic-writing/412255/, (You must log in or sign up to reply here. So getting PhD students to read deep and wide is sort impossible. It was very dense reading but once I got my head around it it was very rewarding. Discussion in 'Mayberry Lounge' started by EL CORINTHIAN, Nov 9, 2018. Or even Wednesday? If you are able to adhere to instructions, have an academic tone when writing and write high quality content, you are an academic writer. In the humanities, they think "that's really impressive stuff. Why is academic writing so needlessly complex. They have principles and they deduce complicated things from the principles. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register. So im in my second year of university as a mature student and we have a week break from school, which most people use to catch up on reading. Like why has polluting your message with language so beyond recognition that no one can understand it become the standard? Take a look at recent information put out by many government agencies such as the Department of Veteran’s Affairs, the Department of Health and Human Services, and the Consumer Financial Protection Bureau—if it lacks needlessly complex sentences or bizarre bureaucratic jargon, it’s largely because of Cheek and her colleagues. It allows students to convey their understanding. Im just making an observation that's all. We're just as prestigious as they are.". I feel personally attacked with this post. The I hate this, I hate that approach is problematic unless you create something worthy of its replacement, regardless of the language used. My thesis could have been ten pages shorter if I had pulled out all of the bloviating and chest-puffery I did. When going to graduate school, that changed. Like someone said earlier "there are different levels to this shit". A lot of the readings we have been given are trash. It was a long time ago, lol. The idea that writing should be clear, concise, and low-jargon isn’t a new one—and it isn’t limited to government agencies, of course. I couldnt give a fuck what they think about the scope of a field is when 80% of their classes are general eds. Why do I have to read and know Barthes, Derrida, and Foucault even though I think they're morons while people who love Barthes, Derrida, and Foucault don't have to read and know Austin, Searle, and Cavell? Also, a second year student in University isn't going to digest the hardest literature in any field. Make no mistake though I'm getting through the readings just fine and my marks are splendid. The problem of needlessly complex writing—sometimes referred to as an “opaque writing style”—has been explored in fields ranging from law to science. Check out the war room. “Persistence is one of the great characteristics of a pitbull, and I guess owners take after their dogs,” says Annetta Cheek, the co-founder of the D.C.-based nonprofit Center for Plain Language. I know what good writing is, I've read enough of it to know by now. Once she retired in 2007 from the FAA and gained the freedom to lobby, she leveraged her hatred for gobbledygook to create an actual law. Why do I have to extend charity to knuckleheads who can't write two sentences without one contradicting the other? You're officially my favorite person on sherdog. At dinner my string beans were ludicrous. Also, as a second year you are suppose to be confused, don't sweat it. Update: Doctor “clarifies”. so....9 years ago or so? There are good reasons to consider that values might have no objective fundamental grounding, that capitalism is a corrosive ideology destined to fail via its own contradications, and that aesthetic preferences are arbitrary. 1. If you do your work seriously, that's fine. ). Yet in academia, unwieldy writing has become something of a protected tradition. Young scholars can't be expected to know it all. Funny enough, my supervisor did her PhD with Mulhall, a OLP and postmodern philosophy scholar. So im in my second year of university as a mature student and we have a week break from school, which most people use to catch up on reading. There are numerous posters who write novels for posts and say next to nothing. Generally, it is a sign that the reader doesn't know the language game well enough. But why does good philosophy owe so much charity to bad philosophy? Worse yet is that it plagues the social sciences WAY more than anything else which is so cringy as they try to sound like real scientists. Probably my junior year of college? We still use his translation of Heidegger's Essence of Reason. Is it smart to become so intelligent that nobody understands you? I don't actually think that's true. Nuts to think about. That specific example is just written by a ponce. “Historically sexy”: Will extramarital sexting scandal derail Dem challenger to Tillis in NC Senate race? I think your rhetoric this post clarifies things for me. As it were, Malick is a bit of a hero of mine. And most of the folks I know who are big deals in the field and quite literally stand on the opposite side from Derrida and the like would tell you the same. Cheek, an anthropologist by training who left academia in the early 1980s to work for the Federal Aviation Commission, is responsible for something few people realize exists: the 2010 Plain Writing Act. I can no longer help here as I no longer know what exactly the target of your complaints is. On the other hand if you take a look at the physics department and the math department, they have all sorts of complicated theories that you can't understand but they seem to understand them. If you do not understand why we need to learn this skill, let’s break it down into sections of importance. So I want to have a theory." https://www.researchgate.net/publication/258844877_The_Challenge_of_Academic_Language, http://mafija.fmf.uni-lj.si/seminar/files/2011_2012/KaluzaKlein_theory.pdf, (You must log in or sign up to reply here. I don't think it reflects any insecurity or that these people don't know what they're talking about. 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It's sounding more now like you just read one bit from one essay and then made a thread about all academic writing, It's pretty easy to figure out what's going on. I'm not a. Good science doesn't owe charity to flat earthers. Generally, the dominant camp is going to decide the course work and testing, which means your own research will follow suit. are a student of academic writing and are steadily building your criteria about what ‘good’ academic writing means for you. This type of writing makes students take in what they have read and decide how much importance it holds for their subject. These criteria are what you use to guide your revision and editing. Bad philosophy needs to be answered, and while I'm not fan of French poststructuralism, Foucault and Derrida are immensly important figures. Sherdog.com is a property of Mandatory Media, LLC, monitoring_string = "5200e30beed193e5fe31f8bccc2bdcbf". Technically, I'm a film scholar (fancy way of saying movie nerd). It's not stupid or silly or anything of the sort...they're just wrong on a lot of things. You're less dismissive than I had originally considered. In this respect, it seems to me that academic writing resembles administration – in both cases, precedent is viewed as dangerous; best to stick to the plan, the format, tried and trusted. Outrage Over YouTuber Illustrates Unhinged Anti-Gun Narrative, Ouch! All Rights Reserved. It depends completely on the context in which it is written. They do experiments and they find either they work or they don't work. They draw far reaching conclusions, we'll draw far reaching conclusions. Minnesota newspaper pulls story mocking Trump family COVID diagnosis, Did Trump know that he had COVID on Thursday? 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